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    1 EXT. COUNTRYSIDE. DAY. 1

    High angle of the steam train travelling through a wide
    river valley. The stack belching smoke against the Russian
    sky.


    2 INT. SECOND CLASS CARRIAGE. COUNTRY SIDE. DAY. 2

    Leo Tolstoy (80), sits writing on his lapboard. He is quite
    simply the greatest living writer in the world. His
    devotion to pacifism, his rejection of the trappings of
    Orthodoxy in favor of a simple Christian lifestyle convince
    many to regard him as a living saint. With him are his much
    younger wife, the COUNTESS SOFYA, favorite daughter SASHA,
    and his personal physician DUSHAN MAKOVITSKY. Sasha and
    Dushan write in their diaries. Sofya looks from one to the
    next a little impatient. The train begins to slow.

    SOFYA
    Why are we slowing down?

    No one responds. Slower. Slower.

    SOFYA
    We're stopping. Why are we
    stopping?

    SASHA
    I don't know, mother. No idea.

    Tolstoy look up from his work, asks a passing conductor.

    SOFYA
    Excuse me, why has the train
    stopped?

    CONDUCTOR
    It's the crowd, ma'm, the people.
    They're blocking the track.

    In the distance we can here voices.

    VOICES (O.S.)
    Long live Tolstoy! Long live the
    old warrior!

    SOFYA
    But if they block the track, the
    train can't go...YOU HAVE TO MAKE
    THEM MOVE.
    2.


    The conductor shrugs, walks away. She goes to the window to
    investigate. A crowd of a hundred peasants, students
    surround the engine, block the track. They carry a huge
    cloth banner honoring Tolstoy. We can hear voices chanting
    "Tolstoy. Tolstoy. Tolstoy", voices crying "You are the
    truth." "You are the hope of the Russian people."

    SOFYA
    Oh, they won't move. We are
    gonna die here. Leo, Leo, go and
    say something to them. It's the
    only way we are gonna get out of
    here.

    The chanting grows in intensity. Tolstoy gets to his feet,
    walks to the window, shows himself to the crowd. A great
    shout goes up. Tolstoy lifts his hand for silence.
    Gradually, it comes.

    TOLSTOY
    I have seen your banner. And I´ve
    heard what you say. You think I´m
    the hope of Russia, do you? Well,
    that´s not true. You are the hope
    of Russia. The hope of all the
    world. You say, you want a new
    way to live? Well, you are not
    gonna find it making a fuss over
    me. So, I suggest that you get on
    with your work and let a poor old
    men get on with his.

    The cries begin. "Clear the tracks. Let them pass. Let them
    go." Tolstoy closes the door and waves to the crowd as the
    train pulls away.


    3 EXT. COUNTRYSIDE. DAY. 3

    On the chanting crowd now as the train pulls away. We
    focus on a handsome young man, a little stiff maybe, a
    little intellectual. This is VALENTIN FEDOROVITCH
    BULGAKOV. He can't contain his enthusiasm. Over the noise
    of the train.

    VALENTIN
    Do you know who that is? That is
    the greatest man in the world.

    The train pulls away into the distance.

    TITLE OVER BLACK: SPRING 1910


    4 EXT. YASNAYA POLYANA. DAWN. 4

    The ancestral home of the Tolstoy family in the first
    budding of spring.
    3.


    Muzhiks (peasants) gather wood, carry water to the house. A
    cart arrives loaded down with mail bags.


    5 INT. YASNAYA POLYANA. SOFYA'S BEDROOM. DAY. 5

    A handsome room, walls covered with generations of family
    photographs. Religious icons are given pride of place, a
    testament, not to piety, but to an ingrained social
    conservatism, a certain position in the world.

    Countess Sofya mumbles her morning prayers before a make
    shift altar. Wiping away tears, she leaves the room.


    5A INT. YASNAYA POLYANA. ENTRY/STAIR. DAY. 5A

    Sofya walks down the stairs and through the entry passed an
    old servant asleep in a chair. She continues to the
    basement.


    6 INT. YASNAYA POLYANA. TOLSTOY'S BEDROOM/STUDY. DAY. 6

    Tolstoy has moved himself out of the refined upper floors
    into a simple vaulted room he uses as both bedroom and
    study. The walls are bare except for a portrait of his
    daughter. The furniture is simple, some of it hand made: a
    small bed against the wall, a little writing desk in one
    corner stacked with books, littered with papers, more mail,
    opened and unopened. Pairs of rude homemade shoes line a
    work bench.

    Tolstoy sleeps in his bed. Though it's late March and
    still cold, the window is open. Sofya closes it. She
    stands very still, watching Tolstoy sleep. Sitting on the
    bed, she gently touches his hand, whispers.

    SOFYA
    Darling.

    She lies next to him, something girlish, hopeful in her
    face, as if waiting for him to wake up and adore her, but
    he sleeps on. She carefully takes his arm, positions it
    under her neck, and rolling toward him, wraps it around
    her. The image of love's intimacy, of wedded bliss.

    His hand slips off her shoulder, once, twice. She moves
    awkwardly to replace it. He moves a little toward her. She
    kisses his neck, his cheek. We don't know if he's awake,
    but even this shadow of intimacy penetrates her soul.


    7 OMITTED 7
    4.


    8 INT. MOSCOW. STUDY. DAY. 8

    A handsome study in the Moscow townhouse of VLADIMIR
    GRIGOREVICH CHERTKOV, Tolstoy's most articulate and
    dedicated disciple. He's interviewing Tolstoy's newly
    appointed secretary, VALENTIN BULGAKOV, the young man we
    met near the train, who, at the mention of sex, blushes a
    little.

    CHERTKOV
    But sex... You are twenty three.
    Not an easy age for abstinence,
    is it?

    VALENTIN
    Tolstoy does not approve of
    sexual relations. I know this.

    CHERTKOV
    He despises them, in fact...

    Chertkov reaches for a small tin of moustache wax.

    CHERTKOV
    I don't want to belabor the
    point, but I arranged for a
    manservant last year who
    proceeded to ruin two housemaids
    just like that. He was very
    upset.

    VALENTIN
    This would not be a problem. I'm
    celibate. I'm also a strict
    vegetarian.

    Chertkov nods his approval, begins to worry his moustache.

    CHERTKOV
    Yes, I've heard many good things
    about you. I've even read what
    you`ve written. So has he.

    Valentin's face flushes with pride. Chertkov steals a
    glance at his reflection in the glass bookcase. One side of
    his moustache droops a little. He tugs awkwardly at it.

    CHERTKOV
    My dear boy, if you were to
    become Tolstoy's private
    secretary, you would be given a
    great gift. You'll be with him
    every day, eat together, walk in
    the forest by his side.

    It's difficult to contain himself.
    5.


    VALENTIN
    Believe me, since becoming a
    Tolstoyan, I have become so eager
    to learn, so comitted to
    discussing ideas, improving my
    very soul.

    CHERTKOV
    (smiling)
    Well, we have a lot to do if we
    are to get his work to the
    people.

    VALENTIN
    We?

    They both laugh.

    CHERTKOV
    Yes, we. If we can encourage the
    spread of passive
    resistance...just think of it
    Valentin thousands of ordinary
    Russians casting off centuries of
    spiritual and political
    oppression-

    VALENTIN
    In the name of truth and freedom.

    CHERTKOV
    Truth and freedom, yes but still,
    my boy, there are so many enemies-

    VALENTIN
    Enemies?

    Chertkov walks to the window, signals Valentin to follow
    him. He points to

    TWO MEN IN PLAINCLOTHES standing in the street below.

    CHERTKOV
    The Czar's police...You'll be
    followed when you leave
    here...and the church will stop
    at nothing to bring him back into
    the fold. His children can't be
    trusted... only Sasha... and then
    of course there is the
    Countess...
    (beat)
    Well, one doesn't like to come
    between married people whatever
    the circumstances, but her dogged
    attachment to private property,
    her public criticism of our
    movement...
    (MORE)
    6.

    CHERTKOV (cont'd)
    (beat)
    The point is, he needs a man of
    your intellectual gifts around
    him. Someone who can help him
    with the new work. Someone who
    understands his goals.

    Chertkov returns to the desk.

    CHERTKOV
    And although they've allowed me
    to return to Russia, I can't see
    him. They keep me under house
    arrest... They might as well keep
    me in a cage.

    Clearly upset, Chertkov pauses to get control of himself.
    He picks up a package, hands it to Valentin.

    CHERTKOV
    So, I need you to put these
    letters directly into his hands.
    One can't be sure what gets
    through to him.

    Valentin looks at him, quizzical.

    CHERTKOV
    Sofya Andreyevna does not respect
    his privacy.

    VALENTIN
    She wouldn't open his private
    correspondence...

    Chertkov raises an eyebrow. An ominous silence.

    CHERTKOV
    I have another task for you, my
    dear.

    VALENTIN
    Please.

    CHERTKOV
    You'll keep a diary for me.

    He hands Valentin a notebook.

    CHERTKOV
    I need to know everything that
    goes on at Yasnaya Polyana. Let
    me know who visits the house, any
    talk of the copyright to his
    work, any contact with the
    church, what letters come and go.
    (beat)
    Anything Sofya Andreyevna says.
    7.


    VALENTIN
    Anything?

    CHERTKOV
    She's very, very dangerous.


    9 EXT. MOSCOW. DOORWAY/STREET. EVENING. 9

    Chertkov kisses Valentin delicately on both cheeks and
    ushers him into the dying light.

    CHERTKOV
    Godspeed, my boy.

    Valentin makes his way to the droshky that awaits him.

    CHERTKOV
    And remember what I said.

    He turns back to the dark figure in the doorway.

    CHERTKOV
    Write everything down! Go!

  • gorocks99
    tl;dr
  • dlazz
    gorocks99;930375 wrote:tl;dr
    +1
  • Raw Dawgin' it
    gorocks99;930375 wrote:tl;dr
    +1
  • FatHobbit
    gorocks99;930375 wrote:tl;dr
    Just like War and Peace.
  • Tiernan
    FatHobbit;930379 wrote:Just like War and Peace.
    ...and even more boring if that's possible.